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Dragoness Eclectic ([personal profile] dragoness_e) wrote2006-08-05 10:02 pm

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Another Skyfire & Starscream story--or rather, another point-of-view of the same story.

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[G1] Skyfire’s point-of-view regarding the incident described in Lines.

As always, enjoy!

p.s. I fixed the link to "that picture" in Lines.

[identity profile] raisedbymoogles.livejournal.com 2006-08-06 03:50 am (UTC)(link)
..............

Stop being awesome, dammit.

[identity profile] wrongly-amused.livejournal.com 2006-08-07 01:39 am (UTC)(link)
You know my critiques of this fic, so I'll just shower you with more praise. I really enjoyed this - probably even more than I did "Lines" because it delves so powerfully into what drives Skyfire as an individual. :-) My favorite scene is actually Ratchet working on Skyfire's repairs - there's alot of emotion being thrown around in that scene, and it's intense without being overbearing or melodramatic. Nice work.

[identity profile] ravenclaw-devi.livejournal.com 2006-08-08 10:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, the opening is lovely. ^_^

Small quibble: "Why did he have to follow that bastard Megatron?" I'm not too fond of TFs using Earth profanity. Why would a race that has no concept of illegitimate birth use "bastard" as an insult?

Great fic; very powerful in terms of emotions and all. (I must stop reading what you write, it's giving me an inferiority complex... )

Like Skyfire, I was surprised that Starscream could forgive him, but I guess having died "for real" in between and having had time to think made a difference...

And you also offer an answer for "Whatever happened to Dr. Arkeville?" Nice.