ext_140500 ([identity profile] wrongly-amused.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dragoness_e 2006-08-07 01:39 am (UTC)

You know my critiques of this fic, so I'll just shower you with more praise. I really enjoyed this - probably even more than I did "Lines" because it delves so powerfully into what drives Skyfire as an individual. :-) My favorite scene is actually Ratchet working on Skyfire's repairs - there's alot of emotion being thrown around in that scene, and it's intense without being overbearing or melodramatic. Nice work.

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